In class: Bring 1 printout of your current draft of the Researched Meditation to class for peer-reading workshop. As a way to earn extra credit, volunteer your essay to be workshopped, and if yours is picked, we'll read it to the class and get their feedback. You'll get 1% extra credit added to your final grade). We’ll also collaboratively determine what an “A” paper should be.
Before next class:
• Post a comment on your own first draft about what you want feedback on.
• Visit the
Meditations page, find a classmate's draft that has not been commented on, read it, and leave feedback. You need to point out at least 1 thing that is working well and 1 thing that could be improved.
• Watch this demonstration of
revising a meditative essay.
• Revise your own meditative essay, using guidelines from The Bedford Guide pp. 371-86,
post the final essay of your researched meditation (remember that part of your grade comes not simply from the final product, but how well you've revised and experimented with different approaches between 1st & final draft).