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Subheadings

Subtiltling sections of writing is very common in academic publications. It helps both the writer and the reader better understand how various paragraphs fit together, and for long essays, it's almost a necessity. Furthermore, it just makes the writing look more professional.

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A college student's draft, without subheadings
A college student's draft with subheadings

How to write a good subheading

• Pose a question that the subsection will answer ("Why is Cheating More Prevalent in Large, Anonymous Classrooms?")
• Simply state the topic of the subsection ("Moral Implications of Cheating for the Workforce")
• Don't use simply a one-word subheading

Shorter paragraphs

In school, we get into the habit of writing long paragraphs. However, bigger doesn't equal better. Breaking paragraphs into shorter chunks helps the reader see the writer's thought process as more discrete steps. And it looks more welcoming

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A college student's draft, with long paragraphs
A college student's draft with short paragraphs

Guidelines for Paragraph length

• In real academic writing, paragraphs often serve one purpose (and can even be one sentence long)
• School rules about each paragraph having a topic sentence, details, quotes, and commentary are good practice, but often don't apply to real world writing

Numbered/Bullet Lists

Putting one item of a list on a line is obviously easier to read than if all the items are jammed together in a sentence. However, unless someone tells us we can do it in essays, we somehow forget common sense. Lists are not only completely acceptable in academic writing, they're commonplace

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A college student's draft, without lists
A college student's draft with lists